Birds At Winter Nightfall (Triolet) Comments

Around the house the flakes fly faster,  And all the berries now are gone From holly and cotoneaster Around the house. The flakes fly! - faster Shutting indoors that crumb-outcaster We used to see upon the lawn Around the house. The flakes fly faster,  And all the berries now are gone! EXPLAIN

Triolets are difficult. I can think of very little I would want to repeat three times in a poem

Around the clock I read old Hardy Until the pages all are done. My dogs will call me worse than tardy around the clock. I read old Hardy Prose and poem as mind grows lardy And half my sanity is gone Around the clock. I read old Hardy Until the pages all are done.