Thursday, December 20, 2018

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I am awake at dawn, the earliest light,
because my heart needs the green air
filtered into its interior space
by my unforced breathing.I am ready...
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Daniel Brick
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Glen Kappy 23 December 2018

A good question to ask oneself, Daniel. Your use of the word brood reminds me of the closing lines of Hopkins’ sonnet God’s Grandeur—because the Holy Ghost over the bent world broods with warm breast and with ah! bright wings. A festive and restorative holiday season to you, brother! -Glen

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Bernard F. Asuncion 20 December 2018

Daniel, a wonderful awesome poem👍👍

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Daniel Brick

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St. Paul MN
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