Thursday, April 3, 2014

Birds And Girls Comments

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Pretty, colorful flying graces,
Gliding in air, twittering everywhere,
I have seen their smiling faces,
Loyal to spouse, no affair.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 30 December 2019

Mostly deceived, by playboys, Enjoying a girl, looking for other, They take them as beautiful toys, Not to love and live for ever. mostly men look fo their momentary pleasure that is in built in human nature

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Farhan Mirza 03 January 2015

It was written so nicely.

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 November 2014

Great work! Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.

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Ramesh Rai 03 September 2014

Some time it makes me to think how they flee from one nest to make another nest. whenever they go to old nest they become restless within a day or two to their own crafted nest. I m the bird of my father will flee oneday for ever. Beauty explodes in your write.

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Khalida Bano Ali 25 August 2014

A beautiful poem with a message

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V P Mahur 14 June 2014

Dear Bro, You have beautifully described the reality of love affairs. Thanks for your comments.

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Valsa George 03 June 2014

A beautiful comparison.... It would have been better if the comparison had been between girls and caged birds.... Any way men enjoy ' bird watching'! Enjoyed this light hearted poem!

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Kirti Sharma 03 May 2014

Nice poem... It shows you respect girls..

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Captain Herbert Poetry 18 April 2014

An eye opener to the reader. Very Good

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Yasmin Khan 17 April 2014

You think birds and girls are same....yes, a unique comparison but are girls free to fly anywhere? :)

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Khalid Saifullah 03 April 2014

What a poem! I think the best from him, expecting more.

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