Wednesday, June 5, 2019

Birds And Bees Fly Better Comments

Rating: 5.0

Tonnes of glitter and gloss gasping to race
Up the runway, rising to kiss the sky,
Lifted up but by air, pumping up pace,
Or landing else, down from the heavens high,
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 07 June 2019

A wonderful sonnet with superb imagery. It captures the many wonders of nature. Man's creations no matter how advance can never surpass the Hands of Mother Nature. Brilliantly penned, Sir.

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Aniruddha Pathak 08 June 2019

Thanks again Rose Marie for such good comments.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 June 2019

An excellent sonnet about nature and human beings desperate attempt to catch up with nature through exploration of technologies! Thanks dear sir for sharing.......................10

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Aniruddha Pathak 07 June 2019

Thank you Dr Swain for reading the poem.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 05 June 2019

A sublime sonnet, sir Aniruddha.....10+++++++++++++

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Aniruddha Pathak 05 June 2019

Thank you Rev Bernard for finding the sonnet good.

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