Monday, September 29, 2014

Birds Comments

Rating: 5.0

Procession through the desert
Cranes fly over India
Pigeons scramble for their crumbs
China harbors the omen of swallows
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Joseph Narusiewicz
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Connie Marcum Wong 29 September 2014

Joseph, Your poem speaks of the sensibilities of appreciating the beauty of nature as a true poet sees the world. It is beautiful and I gave it a 10. Aloha, Connie

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Joseph Narusiewicz

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