Wednesday, April 29, 2009

Birds Comments

Rating: 5.0

Soaring high
Birds of the sky
You know your way
Across continents
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Sandra Martyres
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Sandra Fowler 28 December 2009

How lovely. When I write, in my mind, I am soaring with those birds. You have captured the essence of poetic freedom in this one, dear Sandra. Love, Sandra

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Patti Masterman 18 August 2009

It's interesting how as we grow older; grow up, things which never seemed to be a big deal (we were used to them, sort of took them for granted, seeing them constantly) are suddenly realized to be such miracles. It's just that we grew immune to their magic and mystery from long association. Perhaps if we went into a long coma, then woke up and saw the world again..everything would seem like a magic show, a trick of the living god, a miracle performed solely for us.

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Saadat Tahir 07 July 2009

a great truism and yearly event of magnitude done in such few lines and very well at that cheers

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rago rago 05 July 2009

amazing write........ let the birds fly liketh the imaginations in you too fly over the sky.........

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Indira Renganathan 25 June 2009

Such is nature's gift, nature's way...Godly....short and sweet...thanks Sandra for all your comments

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Soaring high Birds of the sky You know your way, , , good observation. not only in free way but nature's way and season; s use as compass... good write.. divorce is pure imaginery work

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Smiley Hooker 10 June 2009

For sometime in my life, I dreamed of becoming a bird. You have written all the reasons why. thanks for this wonderful poetic write! : -)

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Ashraful Musaddeq 16 May 2009

Without map and compass, birds know their way. Small and cute poem, love it with 10+

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C. P. Sharma 12 May 2009

Beautiful soaring of the soul. Simple words say everything. CP

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lovely...birds home seems to be large and wide...the world...man has definitely has lost his intuition in his endeavour to civilise

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Alf Hutchison 11 May 2009

A few choice words say it all so eloquently... very well done... Alf

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Fiona Davidson 11 May 2009

Wonderful poem Sandra...like the birds it soars....Fi 10+++

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 11 May 2009

Soaring high in life one knows which is the better climes well said

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Subroto Chatterjee 10 May 2009

Very intelligent bird...very intelligent writer...Ahhh..a bird that can guide us? Absolutely! And its true....Fly robin, fly! ! I like it... Cheers. Subroto

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 09 May 2009

very illuminative and imaginative! inviting and inspiring! like Stravinsky Firebird on words!

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Raj Arumugam 08 May 2009

love the poem! It's a sort of meditative exercise on one aspect of nature...

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Eyan Desir 06 May 2009

So true how did u know birds know tht? you talk with birds haha

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Mamta Agarwal 06 May 2009

beautiful, birds follow instict, no guide maps. short and succinct.10 Mamta

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Alison Cassidy 05 May 2009

A succinct and articulate response to the wonder of flight and the bird's instinct for survival. I did enjoy this poem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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~ Jon London ~ 04 May 2009

Such a natural beauty, like the winds of summer, your lines gently sway....short but beautiful

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