Birds Comments

good poem you used the imagination to draw a picture of birds. Your level of writing is very good. keep up the good work and i cant wait to see your reach the depth of poetry. -love peace and joy

you wrote like birds! ! i don't know how but it looked like a bird...very sweet and vivid..

This is a very good poem. I suggest that you capitalize 'God'. Other than that it is a very amazing poem. You have the heart of a poet. :)

I see you did your home work well