Wednesday, November 16, 2022

Birds 13 - Pileated Woodpeckers Comments

Rating: 5.0

He made his move, as a man would
Piping to her clear and high
She reciprocated, side by side
They sat for a few minutes.
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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon
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Part 2. I hear an incessant tap-tap and look out to see a pair of beautiful woodpeckers working on their hole. The tree is pretty tall and it moves with each tap. So I could not capture a pic to share with you on ph. Sorry about that.

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Woodpeckers are a very large species, with numerous Sub+Species. In my compound, there stands an old arecanut tree, already dead, with its green head of foliage gone. I hear an incessant tap-tap and look out to see a pair of beautiful woodpeckers

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Kim Barney 20 November 2022

I love woodpeckers, except when they peck on my house!

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Hi Poet Mr Kim Barney, the woodpecker could be pecking (or penning) his poem on the house of our Master Poet. You have to bear with it, sir.

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David Wood 20 November 2022

Excellent piece, I hear woodpeckers in spring where I live too. A good 5*

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I do love them. The woodpeckers here are not the pileated ones. But nice to watch see, harsh to the ears 😊

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Bri Edwards 20 November 2022

Seeing pileated woodpeckers is a great experience. You should try it. : ) bri

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Sure. I watch them on u-tube. In our place, Kerala too we have lots. They make holes on all our coconut trees, mango trees and even the sturdy jack-fruit trees. But they are not the pileated ones. Still quite beautiful.

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Bri Edwards 20 November 2022

I've seen birds and dogs and cattle and at least one (make that TWO) horses 'having '. And even slugs once. I still didn't get it quite right the first time tried it. Ha! bri ;)

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You should have tried with a different girlfriend, Bri. Provided, the first one doesn't object.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 November 2022

I love birds and this sweet poem too

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Thank You, Dillipji. As have said, bird-watching is my passion, second to poetry & reading. But woodpeckers are a class apart, sir. We should watch them work to understand them. Thank You

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Bri Edwards 20 November 2022

I had to research 'couched' vs 'crouched' and, again, language is SO COMPLICATED sometimes! I thought poet meant 'crouched' & I still do. ' To press the entire body close to the ground with the limbs bent'

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Kim Barney 20 November 2022

You're right, Bri. 'Crouched' would make much more sense.

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You are right Bri. I will make the correction. Thank you. English is so complicated. And Indlish much more complicated.

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" Rose Marie Juan-austin rated a poem titled Birds 13 - Pileated Woodpeckers 5- start ratings" She has also added it to her Favourites. Thank You, Rose Marie.

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" LeeAnn Azzopardi rated a poem titled Birds 13 - Pileated Woodpeckers 5- star ratings". Thank You, LeeAnn.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 20 November 2022

Great poetic expressions and very informative poem. To my favorites.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 20 November 2022

A beautiful, very vivid and unique story crafted in a spellbinding poem. So brilliantly expressed.

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 16 November 2022

Excellent poetic diction on Pileated woodpecker; it's a beautiful birds loving song

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Thank You, dear poet. Bird-watching is my passion. I love to read about them.

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Thank you, dear poet for the good words about the poem. Feels great.

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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