Sunday, November 22, 2009

Birds Comments

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Creech.........Creech
Oh my dear birds the mom call
The bird peep and protrude nest
Creech, Creech oh my dear birds
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Sivashanmugam Shanmugam
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Valsa George 13 May 2013

The trees that once nested birds are mercilessly cut down by unthinking men, leaving poor birds homeless and depriving the Earth of its cooling greenery! A thoughtful write! !

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 April 2010

This is the lost feeding in this nest The strangers, Oh that evil devil men Going to cut this tree to pave the road! Creech...Creech..All the birds cry..Oh mom....lovely poem and disgusting for men to cut their home for taking refuge.. nice to move with birds and watch them make sweet voices.....10 read mine.... nice to hold

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Rajaram Ramachandran 01 December 2009

True, the birds have freedom to live not in one tree alone but on several trees.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 27 November 2009

Roadrollers are ruling the world. Greens are paving way to roads, buildings and all concrete structures. Very good poem Sir. Another masterpiece from you.

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Obinna Eruchie 22 November 2009

Mother bird ready to feed her chickens, oh here comes trouble—the falling of trees. Interesting poem!

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Carol Gall 22 November 2009

good poem too many trees are cut 10

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Sivashanmugam Shanmugam

Sivashanmugam Shanmugam

Karur / Tamilnadu / India.
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