Sunday, September 11, 2011

Bird Table Outside My Window Comments

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Letting in the Sun's rays upon opening my window,
but mountains i do not see covered in snow.
Only thing visible is a grey sky and a miserly sun,
telling people indirectly that morning has begun.
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Renu Kakkar
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Renu Kakkar 26 September 2011

thank you sadly these days the house birds have stopped coming..only a few sparrows and the pigeons and crows are around..those little house birds which used to wake us in the morning have disappeared due to the mobile phone towers....sad really..i use my mobile less now

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Allemagne Roßmann 11 September 2011

picturesque and cinematographic...well written..i am carried away with the lines so inspirational here.Wonderful extended metaphors some parts of it...

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Renu Kakkar

Renu Kakkar

Fazilka, punjab
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