Sunday, January 27, 2019

Bird Song Comments

Rating: 5.0

The song of these birds
Have mesmerizing effect
My ears never feel fatigue to hear
And my mind remains in serenity
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M. Asim Nehal
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Valsa George 30 January 2019

So very true! Early in the morning I love waking up listening to the songs of birds! It makes our heart swim in a sea of serenity! We poets are fortunate to enjoy Nature more than any others! Lovely quatrain!

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Dr Antony Theodore 27 January 2019

serene mind and mesmerizing effect......... the bird song. just fine a poem. thank u. tony

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Edward Kofi Louis 27 January 2019

In serenity! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Juhaina Tumlu 27 January 2019

Refreshing and soulful songs.

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Bharati Nayak 27 January 2019

A bird's song is melodious and has a mesmerizing effect on our boy and mind.But we should be attuned to listen that song. A beautiful poem, thanks for sharing.

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Muzahidul Reza 27 January 2019

The song of these birds Have mesmerizing effect, well done, but the second line needs a little correction, its have will be replaced with has, Thanks for sharing the poem with us here in PoemHunter.com +10

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M Asim Nehal 27 January 2019

Thanks Much. In that case it could be: The song of these birds Has a mesmerizing effect or Have mesmerizing effect (Both are correct)

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Jayatissa K.Liyanage 27 January 2019

Very true Asim. Bird song, as much as other natural melodies do soothe hearts and minds. Thanks for sharing a soothing thought.

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M Asim Nehal 27 January 2019

Thx Much Jayatissa

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