Monday, March 3, 2008

Bird Song Comments

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Like a bird shot to the ground, just as she learns to fly,
Pulled from the warm winds, on the weight of all the lies
Her saviour's silence deafens her,
shadows embrace her all around
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Bridgid Patrick
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Craig Dawson 10 May 2017

I am not sure if Bridgid will receive this message or not, but it's worth a try. (I'm unable to send you a private message and I have asked admin for help but there wasn't mush they could do. I've also searched the internet far and wide.: -)) I have almost finished the second draft of a novel that has this poem in it. Respectfully, I am seeking your permission to use it. (I am happy to send you the context it is written in as well.) Please respond to me via Poem Hunter if that's ok. Best wishes. I love your writing. Craig

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Rachel Butler 21 September 2009

She listens in the darkness, Rachel Ann Butler

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Flora Gillingham 03 March 2008

Beautifully expressed.

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