Bird! Sing! Comments

A brilliant tickle poem my friend..love the humourous lines...well penned

There is humor there is voice there is suspense there is noise/////// but eventually there is spirit and that comes through. Thanks - arya

Great humour you have here, rare to see such original work here. Keep on good work. Best wishes. A.

Nicely crafted as always my friend...Humor sense poetry again...10+++