Monday, June 17, 2013

Bird's Song Comments

Rating: 5.0

Every morning i see
birds are chirping
sitting in a queue
...
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ramesh rai
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Patricia Grantham 08 March 2016

Beautifully stated. A nice poem about nature. Enjoyed.

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Akhtar Jawad 07 July 2014

a nice and beautiful poem.

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Akhtar Jawad 07 July 2014

a nice and beautiful poem.

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Amitava Sur 03 July 2014

Getting up in the morning hearing chirping of birds sounds very pleasing, but more I liked you expressed that thier melody energizes and adds fidility to life...... very nice

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Walterrean Salley 30 June 2013

Bird's song is sooo sweet. It adds to the beauty of life. We hear it everyday, and it inspires us in a great way, though we cannot understand it. A beautiful writing here. Thank you Ramesh.

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Hazel Durham 22 June 2013

Your poem is as beautiful as the bird's song with charm and grace so divine!

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Valsa George 22 June 2013

I think most of us are drawn towards birds chirping and singing on tree tops! Their pleasing melody greets us as we wake up to the light of day! Enjoyed! Thanks for your nice comment!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 20 June 2013

Birds excite me. They are pleasant to watch and melodious to listen. Your poem is beautiful. Kindly read my poems 'Bird's Lament', 'Birds Missing', and 'Building Bird Friendly'. Thank you

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Shahzia Batool 20 June 2013

A feast for sight in the first stanza, and hearing in the rest of the poem...i recall wordsworth's The World, where he says the world is too much with us, late and soon, Getting and spending we lay waste our powers, a sordid boon...the reason of my recalling the lines from this sonnet is that we are so much into the problems that we miss the birds'chirping, the sun rising and setting, such scenes and melodies are really missed...it is a gentle poem!

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Valerie Dohren 18 June 2013

I love birds, they are beautiful like your poem Ramesh.

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Dinesan Madathil 18 June 2013

Ramesh Pai sir, It is a nice poem and it is your chirping for us who can reach out to you Happy to read your comment after a long time.

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Farah Ilyas 18 June 2013

Beautiful display of birds chirping, well explanation of involvement of personal experience..

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 17 June 2013

so tender and beautiful poem thanks for sharing

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