Monday, June 4, 2007

Bird Or Fish? Comments

Rating: 5.0

The penguin’s graceful, swim
So powerful through the waters skim
No fear has this warm hearted bird
Rushing to find the huddled herd
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David Taylor
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Clever penning, David...Uniquely interesting storyline...Like the rhythm you strike... You ever work for National Geographic? lol! Solid Write! FjR

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Marci Made 04 June 2007

Im going with the heart of the penguin only because of a warm heart as opposed to a cold one...Though Mako Shark is one of the 'few' fish I enjoy. This is cute and a neat story. Your penguin would be happy here today in the pouring down 'cats and dog rain.' welcome back, missed your words.....marci.xo

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