Bird On The Wing Comments

I really loved this piece.... I now have to find out the definition of Valkyrie. Something mythical? You are educating me.Thanks

Unique poem; enjoyed it. Thanks for the comment on mine. Interesting analogy. Adeline

Terrific imagery and spinning metamorphic meanderings.

I love your challenge to those winged Goddesses Jim, so full of imagery. I imagine this recalls an experience from which you write so vividly. Ten for this chilling account my friend. from Fay.

It's nice to read a poem with decent and stylish verse. I like words that have a picture in mind. I can only strive for my own. Jan Harvey