**bird Of Dawn Comments

O happy morning of the day The night was long awaken The first song of bird of dawn Is my song of hope I have not seen you O deity of love Nor am I in inclination to see Let alone worship thee the above stanza is heart feeling and soul touching one..I went through few of yours poems and founf them interesting and written professionally.. flow is melodic and the composition of words is quite impressive and found your ideas innovative too.. like here in the above poem you did..well done 10/10

eloquent expressions........... beautifully penned............

beautiful poem..nicely done..grace

Lovely poem 10