Bird Logic Comments

good poem, Animals live with more practical intelligence including emotional intelligence but in non-verbal logic and non verbal emotion mode.

wonderful enumeration of sights of everyday life and getting the anecdote dribble through the philosophical lanes of different life of animaldom and humans.I like to add that unholy ambition of a few crusaders have distorted the path of civilization from its ideal way.

Using pigeons you nailed the human errs, although we are Ashraful-Makhluqat Supreme creation of Almighty yet we fight, envy, kill, differentiate etc etc....We do not value our freedom and instead we are slave of our wishes, gadgets, norms of the society, culture, tradition, fashion.....A thought provoking poem,10+++

What a great poem. Speaks of the uninhibitedness of the animal world around us and the walls we as humans have built around our most heartfelt urges to appear more sophisticated. Perfect accompanying photo. Congratulations on being published as well, the piece is well deserving

Jasbir! Such a beautiful poem about two loving pigeons.! I totally agree! The bird logic is very different from human logic. We are free birds, not humans. We don't have to believe in their silly theories and stinking isms. We value freedom above everything else; We don't fight, kill, and wage wars and love is all that we believe in. I like your style of writing. Frank, with a clear concept and an earnest philosophy! Enjoyed it. Full score!

and i just added this to MyPoemList. i thoroughly enjoyed it. bri :)

no code number is this something new? I hope!

lovely theme and thought. If only it had rhythm and rhyme I think it might be a classic.

Your poems are such a delight to read, It brings to fore the hypocrisy of our thinking. Thanks. Don't worry, Darling / We are free birds, not humans / We don't fight, kill, and wage wars and love is all that we believe in.