Bird In The Sky Comments
Those days are lost forever, to the depths of the past
While the tide of memories, will bring them back,
Oh a pity, that I belong to the shore called today‘
While I can just watch the sea, which stretches beyond my reality,
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Abhay I rated this one as well. I find this one insightful and intriguing at the same time. Nice work!
I thought this piece was lovely and mind provoking. Try my simple poem 'Skylark'.
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7/20/2025 12:42:17 PM # 1.0.0
You have compared time with a bird and you are writing with tinge of philosophy in your poems. I quote Omar Khayyam in comparison Bird of time has little way to flutter O the Bird is on the wing -KAVIN CHARALAN