Brown, brownie, loving beings,
Beaming, bouncing, tiny birds,
Hiphip -hophop - household aves,
Hopping, swinging, dancing sparrows!
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Loved the lines and the image..... As always, it's so beautiful
Compelling and alive! A beautiful write of little brownies in indigenous flight!
Brown, brownie, loving beings, Beaming, bouncing, tiny birds, niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Woderful poem! bravo! please read and comment on my poem The Meadow. If you read it before; read once more because it is fixed Thanks
A sweet poem and a lovely picture! I miss the sparrows very much.In our childhood days there were plenty of sparrows living around our house and we were listening to their constant chirping.
The compelling imagery makes me at close range with these lovely birds. A marvelous poem! ! ! Loved the picture that enhanced the beauty of this write.
Wow reminded me my childhood days. I don't see them often even at my farmhouse they are rare to be seen which were so common 2 decades back.
I've become richer today. The birds have given me a new word- 'ave'.
Thanks, Dear Geeta ji. It is difficult to tell which one is more beautiful- picture or the poem. The more you watch and read them the more you are taken into its spell. Your love of nature is all too evident here.
A sweet and cute description ❤