Thursday, April 1, 2021

Bird Colours 5 - beaming Brownie Birds Comments

Rating: 5.0

Brown, brownie, loving beings,
Beaming, bouncing, tiny birds,
Hiphip -hophop - household aves,
Hopping, swinging, dancing sparrows!
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon
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A sweet and cute description ❤

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Renuka Dhabadgaonkar 20 March 2022

What a sweet little quatrain! Lovely composition 👌❤️

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Praveen Menon 20 March 2022

Loved the lines and the image..... As always, it's so beautiful

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Shruthi Menon 20 March 2022

Lovely poem

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Rama Nair 20 March 2022

Cute poem

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Preeti Maity 11 June 2021

Short and sweet poem.

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Vrinda 10 April 2021

Lovely browny bird poem.

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Captain Cur 04 April 2021

Compelling and alive! A beautiful write of little brownies in indigenous flight!

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Kostas Lagos 04 April 2021

Aren't sparrows adorable? Lovely poem!

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me poet yeps poet 02 April 2021

Brown, brownie, loving beings, Beaming, bouncing, tiny birds, niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 01 April 2021

Woderful poem! bravo! please read and comment on my poem The Meadow. If you read it before; read once more because it is fixed Thanks

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Bharati Nayak 01 April 2021

A sweet poem and a lovely picture! I miss the sparrows very much.In our childhood days there were plenty of sparrows living around our house and we were listening to their constant chirping.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 01 April 2021

The compelling imagery makes me at close range with these lovely birds. A marvelous poem! ! ! Loved the picture that enhanced the beauty of this write.

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M Asim Nehal 01 April 2021

Wow reminded me my childhood days. I don't see them often even at my farmhouse they are rare to be seen which were so common 2 decades back.

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Rajnish Manga 01 April 2021

I've become richer today. The birds have given me a new word- 'ave'.

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Rajnish Manga 01 April 2021

Thanks, Dear Geeta ji. It is difficult to tell which one is more beautiful- picture or the poem. The more you watch and read them the more you are taken into its spell. Your love of nature is all too evident here.

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