Saturday, May 6, 2017

Bird 6 - The Whimsical Warbler Comments

Rating: 4.8

The songs of a warbler
Sometimes sharp, screechy and shrill,
At times, long, frilly and trill,
Many a time, melodious and entertaining!
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon
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Akhtar Jawad 14 May 2017

Warblers that come with the sun add a melody in our lives. A very common bird in this part of the world. The poetess has nicely described their beauty and their songs.

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Thank you Akhtar Sahab. Yes, they do add melody to our lives.

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Loke Kok Yee 13 May 2017

Love the little warblers which you had painted well your lovely write on birds, they really do excel Thanks for the fun Geeta-10

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Thank you Loke again. I am really glad that you had fun reading this bird poem. You are, indeed, very generous.

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Jazib Kamalvi 12 May 2017

Very beautiful and minute detail of nature which appeals to audio-visual senses. Thanks

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Thank you Jazib for your lovely comment. I am happy that it appealed to you.

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Anil Kumar Panda 11 May 2017

A beautiful poem on different kinds of warblers. Very descriptive and interesting to read. Have to look for one to enjoy its charm. Thanks for sharing.

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Anil, thank you for your interesting comment. Hope you will be able to spot a warbler! :)

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Susan Williams 10 May 2017

Oh! Excellent descriptives! ! ! ! - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Sometimes sharp, screechy and shrill, At times, long, frilly and trill, - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Tip toe, tip toeing on the evergreen grass, Hip hop, hip hopping in the thick bushes- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Wish I were a whimsical warbler, Flying along hills, fields and forests, - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -Great word choice! ! ! ! Puts the reader into a whimsical mood for sure! And the reader hears and sees those birds very clearly by the words chosen!

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Thank you Susan for your kind appraisal of my poem. God bless

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Glen Kappy 08 May 2017

hi, geeta! i'm not familiar with warblers, so it's interesting to me to read of the different types. here we have four different types of doves. the coloring of the bird in the picture reminds me of goldfinches, but the males have black caps on their heads. on your wish in the last stanza, you might like my poem to fly. have a good week! glen

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Thank you Glen for reading this poem on warblers. There are various kinds of warblers with different colour combinations. But doves are generally white, grey or black in colour. I am very fond of birds. Surely, i shall read your poem - To fly

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Rajnish Manga 07 May 2017

It has been an altogether new experience- a poem about a warbler, its habits, family and habitat. It requires a lot of research to know a bird and its nature. You have done a fabulous job. And on top of it, the subject has been presented in a poetic with great perfection. This is now a favourite poem. Wish I were a whimsical warbler, Flying along hills, fields and forests, Singing with the rhythmic wind, Whistling wonderful songs of love!

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Rajnish ji, once again, may i thank you for your prolific comment. Its always a pleasure to read your observations on my poems. I am a lover of birds and consider birds to be the most beautiful creation of nature. God bless you.

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Seema Chowdhury 06 May 2017

Wonderful songs of love.... I hope you always write and spread beauty and peace through your amazing words.

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Thank you so much for your kind words. Stay blessed always Seema.

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