Saturday, August 15, 2015

Bird 5 - Käkä -The Crow Comments

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Crow -the intuitive bird,
Corvus - the biological genus,
Corvidae - the family it hails from,
Carrying itself and flying in a straight line,
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon
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Denis Mair 11 November 2019

Indeed, the crow is an INTUITIVE BIRD. It observes human activities while remaining ironically detached. Unlike songbirds that disappear when their traditional haunts are gone, the crow adapts to urban settings. It's interesting that crows are seen as vehicles for departed souls to visit us.

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Bharati Nayak 11 November 2019

The crow- a bird that is not regarded as beautiful, nor having sweet voice, but it is still an important creature of nature.We may learn so many things from their behaviour.A story about the thirsty crow we heard in my childhood days speaks of the cleverness of crow. Yours is a great poem on crow that has some elements of Hindu belief about this bird.I second the views of Rajnis Manga on this poem.

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Valsa George 30 June 2018

Crow is a bird familiar to all people with its ubiquitous presence! I too have written a few poems on crows! Definitely it is a clever bird. As you say it can be mischievous and mean. Still we all love this scavenger! A lovely poem, full with everything believed and attributed to a crow! A big10

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Glen Kappy 17 July 2017

geeta, it's easy for me to see why you've chosen the crow as a subject. i too have been fascinated by them and made several attempts at writing about them. presently i have just one poem posted in ph with the title, naturally enough, crows. here they are more common in the colder weather- coming in autumn as it gets colder- and leaving in spring as it gets warmer. glen p.s. kaka is an onomatopoetic word for the crow. i tend to hear the sound as caw caw. like other corvids, we generally don't think of their sounds or calls as musical, do we? -g

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Hi Glen, Though poets do not consider crow as a subject to write poems, yet, i feel crows with their irritating caw caws, and most non-musical sound, is still of great significance in India. Thank you for reading the crow poem. Stay blessed Glen.

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Rajnish Manga 24 May 2017

Dark as the night, Deep black plumage, Determined, but unsung hero among the birds.... // I have read quite a number of poems about crow since my childhood but I have no doubt in saying that this is a real masterpiece. No body could have written such an ode to an ordinary crow without love of nature all around as well as adequate knowledge of culture within which we exist and to which we can relate. We also get a message that all creatures deserve to be treated kindly. Thank you so much, Geeta ji.

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Dear Rajnish ji, I cannot express how happy i am that you read my poem on Kaka or theCrow. Thank you again and again for your beautiful comment. I truly value them like precious gems. Thank you too, for voting for this poem. The humble crow was without a vote for two years.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 August 2015

Marvellous depiction. Well presentation with excellent collocation. Thanks for sharing such intensive poem about a bird like crow......10

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Many, many thanks to you Kumarmani. Happy that you read the poem.

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Thank you very much.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 15 August 2015

Truly, a crow is a mysterious bird with virtue and vice. Loved reading the poem

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Thank you for your comment. I am happy that you loved the poem.

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