Wednesday, April 10, 2019

Bird Comments

Rating: 5.0

A powdery pale friend of my mother's
sagging stockings nearly white
nearly blending into wrinkles elsewhere
on face, on neck, on arms
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Jenny Kalahar
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Kim Barney 02 May 2019

Wow! I love this! You have a wonderful way with your descriptions. Especially like the twin blue moons comparison. Great work!

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Haile Tesfaye 01 May 2019

Well written my friend! ! !

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Jenny Kalahar 01 May 2019

Glad you like it! Thank you! - Jenny

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Dr Antony Theodore 18 April 2019

She wore a beaded hairnet that made her look as if a misting rain had fallen only upon her snow-white head. very fine description with wonderful words. thank u dear poetess. tony

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Jenny Kalahar

Jenny Kalahar

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