Wednesday, January 17, 2018

Bird 12 - The Black Spots In The Blue Skies Comments

Rating: 5.0

Am I not a ravenous raven?
Crowing my heart out!
Famished and depraved,
Of love and compassion
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon
COMMENTS
Kumarmani Mahakul 05 December 2018

I have a voracious appetite, And may gobble food like a glutton, But shall I share a secret? I carry around virtuous souls, On a ride in the blue skies! .......touching expression with a nice theme. Beautifully painted. A brilliant poem on bird especially on crow expressing brotherhood has been astutely presented.10

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Akhtar Jawad 25 January 2018

All the creatures have a beauty, crows are famous for their brotherhood.

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The raven is a beautiful bird with simple look.10p

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Yiyan Han 21 January 2018

Black is new blue hahaha You're such a nature lover :)

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Thanks Yiyan. Yes, i am happy to tune in with nature. :)

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Loke Kok Yee 19 January 2018

A nature lover sees beauty in all creatures, but it takes a great poet to paint the beauty for others to see. If ravens can read, they will sing their praises for you. Thanks Geeta

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Thank you and bless you Loke. Hope the Ravens read my poem. But i wonder, how many will tolerate if the Ravens begin to sing my praises? ? ?

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Dr Dillip K Swain 19 January 2018

I love nature and naïve birds! I like this beautiful poem! I quote, “But listen folks! When I fly/I do not fly alone like a lone ranger/I fly with my kith and kin/A flock in unison/Together and jovial! ” It’s a fabulous piece of poetry with delicate expression! Thanks for sharing!

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Happy to know that you too are a lover of birds and nature. So nice of you to appreciate this poem.

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Rini Shibu 17 January 2018

This black spot carries the virtual soul in the blue sky, God created everything with its own beauty and purpose.. Nice poem

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Thank you Rini. Yes, God has created every being with a purpose. Each has it own unique beauty.

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M Asim Nehal 17 January 2018

Superb! ! ! ! ! But listen folks! When I fly I do not fly alone like a lone ranger, I fly with my kith and kin, A flock in unison Together and jovial!

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So good to see you back after a long while. Welcome back Mohammed Asim ji. I was really missing your beautiful comments. Thank you so much.

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