Bird 10 - The Smiling Sparrows Comments
I get up every morning to musical notes, so pleasing!
Sweet chirpy, cheep sounds like teasing,
I know they are tiny, tiny house sparrows,
Soulful birds that bond to sooth human marrows.
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You have change the common sparrow into a poetic delight. thanks Geeta.
Thanks Yiyan. Nice of you to visit my page. It has brought a smile on my face as well.
Hi Geeta, beautiful poem. Show-cases your prowess in observing nature and reduce it into charming little words. A 100++
Thanks Unni, for your nice comment on this poem. Stay blessed.
Reading this poem gives me a feeling as if I am going through a ethereal experience. Your deep love of nature is unparalleled, , observation minute and description meticulous. Thanks for this beautiful poem. Little, little, cute, cute, sparrows - so polite! Letting out their joyous squeaks in delight..... they sing - ding dong - ding dong they glide - sing song - sing song!
Rajnish ji, Thanks a million for this wonderful comment. Your words are always inspiring and elevating.
Hi, Geeta! I like this. It reminds me of songs in Shakespeare plays. The picture looks like what are called Common Sparrows. But we know the fallacy of thinking anything common, yes? Down the street from me in a neighbor’s front yard is a tall Yucca, and in its large crown these sparrows nest year round. Sometimes as I pass they make their presence known in their communal chirping. Glen
Hi Glen, So good to know that this poem reminds you of the songs in Shakespeare plays. You are right. There is nothing common. Every being, i believe, is a special creation of God. Happy to know that you live in a place inhabited by sparrows and other birds and can hear their communal chirping. That lovely, Glen. And a big thanks!
Very beautiful poem reminding me of the Daffodils of William Wordsworth. I appreciate the gliding of sparrows and the poetic diction.
Thank you Nasarudheen for stopping by to read this poem and for your beautiful comment.
Thank you too for your heart warming comment. God bless.
It’s a fascinating poem dear madam! I am delighted the way you have captured the scene… very natural and comical expression! Felt the melody within. I would love to quote a few fascinating lines from your poem, “What a sprightly dance of joyous splendor/I smile at these brownies with wonder/They smile back in united chorus blender/I have made my day with sweet surrender! Thanks a lot for sharing…10
Dear Dr. Dillip, So nice of you, to write such a sweet comment on this poem on sparrow. Yes, i have added a bit of humour which naturally flowed with the rhythm of the poem. Thank you so much. Stay blessed always.
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Excellent...this poem actually sings a song on sparrows.....very musical...how much joy we get from the sparrows watching their activities...not a single day is enough...we need a longer life to enjoy beautiful birds and their singing in nature...indeed a wonderful poem 10++++