Birchous Slender Felted Cove. Comments

Very amusing and I like it.

7. Decent so far in a 'Jabberwocky'-ish way. To make it better, read it out loud - there are some places where the meter trips or is otherwise off.

REALLY like this one.... and I did read it aloud and liked it even more.

My favorite so far. Innovative use of words - I have read this one before, and each time I read it, I am fascinated by the different mental images it brings up.

this poem is meant to be read aloud