Tuesday, July 1, 2008

Bipolar Hate Comments

Rating: 2.7

I'm fake, every choice I make is another mistake.
I hate this fate I'll never escape.
My lifes a mess, I do my best to hide all this pain.
I try and try in vain.
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Heath Chishty
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David Desantis 10 July 2008

this is a really sad poem man....i understand how up and down bi-polar type feelings can be...and im glad you've found this to express your feelings...you do a good job of getting out those emotions, and the rhyme scheme is good....great job, glad to have found your work

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Chris Newlash 01 July 2008

that's so sad

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Heath Chishty

Heath Chishty

Ada, Oklahoma
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