~ Biopsychic ~ Comments

Who are you and how do you appear among us stewing such panspermic nosegays? Here we have a splayed-out anthem, a guided tour of an aroused sensorium, a feelie in 6-D smellovision. Galloping neuro-plasticity overflows banks that never were. You tell of solace enjoyed in a divine creche (as you put it in another poem) . Strange paradox of canopied embowerment and lofty expansion.

Question for you, my dear Niv. Do you express yourself emotionally better in English or in your native tongue?

This is a good allegorical poem that really takes you to the heart of love, and out,

nice interlink between antonyms....lovely to read, especially that I like your style so much...Mari

Who can stop love indulgence in lofty leisure? No one indeed!

It tuned my psychic thoughts.

Incredible poem! It has a rhythmic combination. 'Lofty Leisure' is both paradoxical and enchanting. I enjoyed the harmony in the end.

Wow....... Really good one...... Esecially the last line.....God bless

O’ My Beau I’m incurably yours Attachment brings pains in a material world. Very gripping lines, of pure honest feelings. Loved it.

i think Sougata has explained it all, this is my favourite of your collection so far! i literally felt all my senses light up and i so badly wanted to be the persona at that point. i have read this poem so many times, it feels good to read! it is dream like and has a beauty that reminds me of what all poems, in particular love poems should make you feel. speechless. i awe. humbled. deeply happy. Good one Niv!

Hello Nivedita, This is not a poem. This is a painting, with words. This is a fine-tuned story with full of emotions. This is not a poem. This is a complete story of Life. This is a bridge to be there... where? ? Don't know the place. But can see that very place in our dreams. This is not a poem. This is a feeling. Great One. Thanks.

simple but like brush strokes of a painter

Reminds me of 'Bebe'

A very different attempt and style.

Niv, I read and reread this poem and each time I felt psychic and filled with the narrator's power that overflowed my being! I was captivated by the sensory images in the first stanza...and in the second stanza, 'everything seen, appears matchless, I was embraced by excitement too. 'Why Me' The third stanza, Biopsychic...Omigod! Lovesickness or missing love that metastasized or spread throughout my being: O' my Beau [ I'm a clairvoyant or some sort of supernatural power! ] I'm incurably yours In union/ separation [interesting! ] How wonderful it can be to indulge in a 'Biopsychic' / 'silent tryst' This poem is so well written, Had to read it several times to come up with my analysis. a 10++++++

Two words combined to caption a poem....good attempt and the psyche too10+

As I disregard biopsychic, since I have never heard that word before, and carefully read through the poem I see your love side seeping through. A very good poem and I rate it a 20+ Your friend Lynn

hi Niv, this is a very different poem, and yes we need to read it carefully to understand the underline meanings.thanks for sharing.

Well cooked romantic poem all matchless ingredients of pure emotions Amazing description with gleaming metaphors Last 8 lines a canvas of yearning for cozy warmth of togetherness ‘Under canopy cajole’ with ‘Indulge in lofty leisure’ 10+++

Unless we read BIOPSYCHIC We may dwindle in irrelevance Read, read and read... Till the poem BIOPSYCHIC Psyches you up!