Saturday, August 17, 2013

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Jumpy, jittery, bouncing in joy
Happy as a kid with a new toy
Laughing, leaping, smiling so wide
As this joy just can't hide
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Aric Beers
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Bri Edwards 16 September 2013

i was drawn to the title, enjoyed the lift of it, enjoyed the rhyming. might i suggest you stop taking those hallucinogens? thanks for sharing. my only complaint is that you used flying/fly twice. :)

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 31 August 2013

cool write, nicely written

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