Never speaks
Trapped within damaged brain
Body twisted, limbs trembling
Sitting in hospital yard
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Heartfelt piece with a tourch of beauty for the soul. Besutiful write keep them coming
Very well done and thoughtfully expressed. One has to ponder the life of people that suffer brain trauma, yet they are just as alive and human as all people are and they still have consciousness.
I like this poem a lot. Ir reminds me of a nephew I had who never could walk or talk because of severe cerebral palsy. When he passed away, I wrote a poem about him. His parents liked the poem so much that they had the first eight lines of the poem engraved on the back of his headstone. So far, it's the only one of my poems that is carved in stone. The name of the poem is TODD THEODORE.
I love this a lot. I can picture the dude straight out of farewell to arms or Johnny got his gun sitting outside of a hospital and humming a tune in his head.
How comforting to know that he is not alone, but God hears him too!
very nice poem. Fantastic imagination of the bad situation. Every time the positive though about the God will overcome all bad times or incidents.
it's beautyful that..Articulate with mind intact Singing melodious songs of love and after that: ....Only God and he can hear. congrats Colin by dr. riza
Ever So Deeply! ! ! ! ! And Beautifully Etched! ! ! ! ! Of A Ever So Beautiful Soul! ! ! ! ! Very Strong Powerfully Heart Felt Poem! ! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Endless! ! ! ! ! Endless 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++
An out of the box view of a soul trapped in a pitiable body. Loved it.
A very poignant poem about someone confined to his hospital yard absorbed in himself. Thanks. @@ He never speaks /....Singing melodious songs of love / Only God and he can hear.
Very touching piece of art, of human tragedy and the hope that is ever lodged in the human heart. Thanks for sharing.
Yes.That indeed is the greatness of soul - never dying, ever peaceful soul! A nice poem.
You ask me to comment on your work, what you read on you tube and and your poem Billy, You are a very good writer
How touchy this poem is! Hope against hope, that's all. Nice poem sir! !
The soul is immortal and once we are free from earthly shell, we can sing nonstop. A poet has both the privelege and the pleasure to do this while still alive, in his own ll