Billy Comments

hardened desire... um... very cool... I really like that thought. Becca

Beautiful feelings and a lover's feat!

This poem is beautiful there is no doubt about it I really like it indeed

'filling slowly this life into you' a...play of words (you can choose to fill in the dotted line with any of these words perfect, brilliant, genius etc...i found it too hard to pick one)

I really like this poem, a job definatly well done: -)

'a candy store to a hungry heart' that's my absolute favorite line. i might just borrow that idea for a poem sometime. inspired, taylor

very sweet. i love your work.

Beauty, esp. the last 4 lines, had to reread them several times.

This is amazing..what an imagery explosion...fantastic visuals, texture.............. Remarkable poetess,10/10 Best wishes Jon.

One of the most creative writing ventures I've seen. GW62