Traces of your teeth
stain white skin,
your mouth
sweet as summer's fruit
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This poem is beautiful there is no doubt about it I really like it indeed
'filling slowly this life into you' a...play of words (you can choose to fill in the dotted line with any of these words perfect, brilliant, genius etc...i found it too hard to pick one)
'a candy store to a hungry heart' that's my absolute favorite line. i might just borrow that idea for a poem sometime. inspired, taylor
This is amazing..what an imagery explosion...fantastic visuals, texture.............. Remarkable poetess,10/10 Best wishes Jon.
hardened desire... um... very cool... I really like that thought. Becca