Thursday, May 8, 2008

Billy Comments

Rating: 4.2

Traces of your teeth
stain white skin,
your mouth
sweet as summer's fruit
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Viola Grey
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*Trusting You* 09 June 2009

hardened desire... um... very cool... I really like that thought. Becca

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Deva De Silva 15 March 2009

Beautiful feelings and a lover's feat!

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Kaylee Questionable 02 November 2008

This poem is beautiful there is no doubt about it I really like it indeed

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Existential Despair 06 September 2008

'filling slowly this life into you' a...play of words (you can choose to fill in the dotted line with any of these words perfect, brilliant, genius etc...i found it too hard to pick one)

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Amie-Lee ...... 27 July 2008

I really like this poem, a job definatly well done: -)

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Taylor Butts 20 July 2008

'a candy store to a hungry heart' that's my absolute favorite line. i might just borrow that idea for a poem sometime. inspired, taylor

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Kyle Shield Laster 15 July 2008

very sweet. i love your work.

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Ian X 14 May 2008

Beauty, esp. the last 4 lines, had to reread them several times.

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~ Jon London ~ 13 May 2008

This is amazing..what an imagery explosion...fantastic visuals, texture.............. Remarkable poetess,10/10 Best wishes Jon.

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Greenwolfe 1962 09 May 2008

One of the most creative writing ventures I've seen. GW62

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