Wednesday, April 29, 2009

**billowing Sail Comments

Rating: 3.4

The masts were on the edge
Billowing sail in the temporariness
Filled the air but the ideas to carry
Heavy stones brought by the rage
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Sadiqullah Khan
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Naidz Ladia 13 May 2009

an inspiring piece to everybody..it features an unknown place to others..very smart piece dear sadiq..naizz

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Noel Horlanda 05 May 2009

thought I've not been to Dubai, I saw that hotel only in photos and in the TV featured sometimes early this year. It's magnificent, great architecture. Filipino overseas workers helped built the structure and I'm proud of it. It's a lovely idea that you dedicated a poem to that landmark and the title fits because we could not deny the edifice looking like a big sail under a bright blue sky, just like what we have in Australia. Your creation is beautifully written. What a guy? +10

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Reshma Ramesh 05 May 2009

i think there is more to this...than just the beauty of the place.....sadiq?

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Kesav Easwaran 04 May 2009

a poem in love of a hotel...and its a loviig write...10

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Anjali Sinha 30 April 2009

wowwwww i heard that hotel is one of the largest in the world besides i also heard the roof is glass where one can see the stars and moon am I right I may be mistaken as for your poem I cant say it in words its awesome! ! ! ! ! surely +++10 as always

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Sandra Fowler 29 April 2009

Very intense and passionate. Your metaphors are striking. 10, for you. Warm regards, Sandra

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