The masts were on the edge
Billowing sail in the temporariness
Filled the air but the ideas to carry
Heavy stones brought by the rage
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thought I've not been to Dubai, I saw that hotel only in photos and in the TV featured sometimes early this year. It's magnificent, great architecture. Filipino overseas workers helped built the structure and I'm proud of it. It's a lovely idea that you dedicated a poem to that landmark and the title fits because we could not deny the edifice looking like a big sail under a bright blue sky, just like what we have in Australia. Your creation is beautifully written. What a guy? +10
i think there is more to this...than just the beauty of the place.....sadiq?
wowwwww i heard that hotel is one of the largest in the world besides i also heard the roof is glass where one can see the stars and moon am I right I may be mistaken as for your poem I cant say it in words its awesome! ! ! ! ! surely +++10 as always
Very intense and passionate. Your metaphors are striking. 10, for you. Warm regards, Sandra
an inspiring piece to everybody..it features an unknown place to others..very smart piece dear sadiq..naizz