Monday, May 15, 2006

Bikini'Ed Gravitease. Comments

Rating: 5.0

With tongues a'waggin' down at the beach...
Thonged bikini's admired by men's eyes just a'stretchin' to reach.
Telescopic eyes do wink and a'flutter...
Men stare on like wolfish types, that are a pack's own eviled like
...
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Michael Gale
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MICHAEL...HAVE HEARD MUCH ABOUT YOU, BUT I DECIDED TO READ YOUR WORK ANYWAY...JUST KIDDING, OF COURSE. THIS IS AWELL CRAFTED PIECE OF VERSE, INSTILLED WITH ALL THE KEY ELEMENTS THAT A STELLAR WORK OF LIT. DOES MAKE...NICE PENNING, MICHAEL....JUST ONE BIT OF COSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM, IF YA DON'T MIND: NEXT TIME DON'T CREATE SUCH A BRIEF TITLE....TENDS TO DETER EXPOSURE....HAH! ''''''''''''''''''FRANK

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Michael Gale

Michael Gale

Chicago Illinois/Oklahoma City.
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