BIJ HET KRIEKEN VAN DE DAG….
bij het krieken van de dag
Ik zag vijf vogels op mijn levendige gazon
getjilp, praten en verzamelen
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This Dutch version is nice. You have naturally and beautifully noticed the five chirping birds and found them in conversation. Wonderful sequence you have drawn in this excellent poem. Crystal clear chirping has given us definite motivational message of God. Cracking of dawn has brought up light of dignity to realize and live with trust for God. Nothing is odd, it s true that we believe in God. A great poem is excellently penned...10
Let me recite few lines from this splendid and heart touching poem. " wees niet bang mijn liefste, als je in God gelooft, niet één ding is vreemd, : ....Amazing poem really!