Monday, March 9, 2015

Biggest Lie Life's Got! Comments

Rating: 5.0

I thought you would, you dint
I waited all day long
I hope that you wanted to,
And my expectation was wrong
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Khushbeen Kaur
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Khushbeen Kaur 19 March 2015

Thank you very much :)

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Leah Ayliffe 09 March 2015

How remarkable! Truly, life displayed so well with words. Thanks!

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Mj Lemon 09 March 2015

Magnificent...there is great wisdom in the details you re-count. Indeed, such is life...Great poem...A 10.

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Khushbeen Kaur

Khushbeen Kaur

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