Wednesday, November 4, 2009

Bigger Things Comments

Rating: 2.8

There are bigger things in life than what I tend to write about
Likekids going to sleep at nite with no food in their mouth
Waking up to no light and seeing no way out
So they resort to crime to let their world shine
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Steven Aragon
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Karly Krasne 27 November 2009

The last stanza was my favorite :)

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Infamous Ashley 05 November 2009

wow this was beautiful i really like it! : D oh and thanks for your comment: P

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Penney Cooper 04 November 2009

like this a lot. it's like your very own 'man in the mirror'.

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Lewis Neil Is Awsome 04 November 2009

Listen you! I noticed you just made 5 poems in 10 minutes, are you trying to ruin my future! I just want to be at the top of the list! and if you are making a poem every minute what chance do i have? ! ! ? ! ? thank you, i will be nice if you vote a 10 on the poem Neil is awsome :)

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Steven Aragon

Steven Aragon

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