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I’m always mistaken, nobody gets my words
I feel like calling quits and fleeing away from this world
Why am I always neglected, don’t I have any value?
Everything about me is worthless to every single one of you
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Heba Mahmood
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Akhtar Jawad 21 May 2014

A lovely poem. I liked it.

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Brian Johnston 19 May 2014

Wow Heba! Again I am impressed! Thank you again for honoring me with the chance to comment on your poem. This poem exceeds your first write in my book because it is more daring and revealing of your fierce desire for justice in the world. Fight on brave heart! Here's hoping you inspire many other young women to insist on basic fairness and respect for themselves as well! Please give us a little biographical info won't you. It is so much fun to know that at least for the moment I am your #1 fan on PH! I will write you a more personal note soon!

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Heba Mahmood

Heba Mahmood

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