Big Wig Pub...Chaotic Funny Rub Comments

'Damn the skirt that had me fell Never drool at bawdy damsels, Have their way with magic spells Turn you topsy and do pell-mell' very good choice of words 10++++

Very unusual imaginative and entertaining. Clearly your very own style of writing. Best Steve

hello Saadat This is a different one indeed...very entertaining, interesting one...Is it thought provoking? lolz as usual? ....this is great...i just took a cup of coffee to take deep look at one of your serious pieces...then i found this..very versatile writer you are Saadat...thanks for this one pay you with A++ for making me laugh on a tiresome day......who needs to waste time on theater when we have such stories vividly filmed by great writers? see you soon regards shan

You had me laughing here Saadat. It's bursting with energy and very picturesque. A very enjoyable poem - a drama even. jim