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To transform a grimace into a sound
Sounds impossible, yet it is possible
To transform a vision into music,
To go outside an enslaved personality,
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May be from a planet where someone who is made of Sulphur instead of Carbon, may be that one breathing out Sulphur Dioxide instead of Carbon Dioxide, and the plants consuming Sulphur Dioxide and giving Oxygen in return. She must be sexy gal of mustard color. May be poisonous for me, still I love to love her.
Electromagnetic waves don't need a medium for propagation. Sound and vision both can be transformed in electromagnetis waves and may be sent to the vacant space. Waves never die, may be one day we listen to the melody of another galaxy.
This poem reminds me that we can never be contented with a limited, fixed perspective. We want to situate ourselves in a cosmic totality, so we mobilize all the resources of thought and imagination. This is our birthright but also our burden as conscious beings: we cannot resist entering the systole and diastole of the cosmic heartbeat.
'To transform a grimace into a sound Sounds impossible, yet it is possible To transform a vision into music' - Loved these beginning lines, which have been dwelt upon more in details, subsequently.
Excellent write. It's akin to the spirit of ancient Hindu philosophy of Advaita- All in one and one in all. You have come up with lovely images of universe. Thank you, Dejan.
The poem speaks about escape from the personality. We can realize the greater world (that remains hidden in us) only by stepping out from our small room of personality. Well penned, dear poet Dejan Chandan
Beautiful poetry on flight of imagination to stars and galaxies. Congrats.
Be in everything and come back To a miniscule particle of personality To find out how great all is...... to come to this experience after all that you have written in the beginning of the poem is surely a great task and only a great mind and thinker can do it. thank u dear poet. tony
Lyrical, evocative, thought-provoking... good choice for poem of the day...
Congratulations for this poem being selected as the poem of the day.
An very imaginative piece is art work...enjoyed reading. Congrats
From miniature the BIG arrogate everywhere Miniature begets every BIG through the womb of time And The BIG goes to miniature at end of timing rhyme Miniature is equal to BIG BiG is equal to Miniature This is the whole NATURE! ///// Excellent and mastermind writing
Be in everything and come back To a miniscule particle of personality To find out how great all is. A beautiful journey of awareness and transformation and then to comprehend the true nature of the good spirit within. Lovely poem Dejan. Congratulations!
An adventure of the mind and soul. Not certain if you meant this, but it most certainly sounds like astral travel. A brilliant piece of writing. Thoroughly enjoyed such vivid imagery. Congratulations on a well deserved Poem Of The Day, Dejan!
To contemplate the act of being, to understand existence beyond our own framework. A lively, colorful jaunt through the universe of being. An enjoyable journey, thank you for sharing this vision!
An insightful poem Realise Who we are and where we ought to be, taste the tiniest to biggest particle of this universe
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Congrats! Your poem deserved this honor.