Monday, December 6, 2004

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Rating: 3.2

i long for Nightfall to dropp her heavy curtain
i find myself in the dwindling hours of the day
cutting thru the darkness like a drunken knife
past prophets and prostitutes
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Rev. Dr. A. Jacob Hassler
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Vincent James Turner 26 November 2006

I hate to agree with the majority, but I will allow myself just this once, I have long been an admirer of your work, but usually refrain from commenting on your poems becuase after I read I just wanna shoot myself out of envy. Rarely do I read something wherein I can actually feel whats going on, from the opening line i long for Nightfall to dropp her heavy curtain to the ending lines I was absorbed. I like all types of poetry, but have a soft spot for your kind, you are true to your enviroment and do not sacrifice truth for nice sounding words. I admire you work, Jake.

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