Friday, February 25, 2005

Big Bug Hands Comments

Rating: 4.6

I reach out a
bright, big, bug-eyed hand to the
World,
whose grasp reflects intense, childlike candor
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Zoe Nyght
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Ernestine Northover 21 October 2005

I'm sure you'll succeed in being fascinating Zoe, this is a nice write. Sincerely Ernestine Northover

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Zoe Nyght 14 March 2005

You know...you're right. You're definitely right. In fact, that line had always bothered me. I felt like it kind of interrupted the rhythm, and could be said in a better way. Thank you, Paul. Fixed.

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Laura Cummings 11 March 2005

this one's ace too, keep going babby, your work is on fire!

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Poetry Hound 25 February 2005

You're only 17? Don't stop writing.

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Zoe Nyght

Zoe Nyght

Artesia, California
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