I reach out a
bright, big, bug-eyed hand to the
World,
whose grasp reflects intense, childlike candor
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You know...you're right. You're definitely right. In fact, that line had always bothered me. I felt like it kind of interrupted the rhythm, and could be said in a better way. Thank you, Paul. Fixed.
I'm sure you'll succeed in being fascinating Zoe, this is a nice write. Sincerely Ernestine Northover