Wednesday, March 28, 2012

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We had been by each others sides
every day and night
you were there when i cried
my trails of tears you dried
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Jasmine Thompson
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Cameren Lee 28 March 2012

The prior comment capsules my thoughts. I especially enjoyed (for lack of better term) the reference to the Trail of Tears. You're an honest poet. The world needs you - don't ever try and convince yourself otherwise. ;)

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Rhiscx The Final Burden 28 March 2012

Beautiful :) simply beautiful

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