Wednesday, December 6, 2006

Bigbigthe Darkest Hourbigbig Comments

Rating: 4.3

so far in disarray
wondering if this is real
not knowing what to feel
so caught up in fantasies
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Alia Ford
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Esther Leclerc 06 December 2006

I like your irregular rhyme schemes, Alia... Wanting to be rescued on reaching the lowest point - yes. But no one knows you like you do (and God, if you believe) , so let it all out... then begin again. Baby, the past is only as dead as you let it be. Nice work here. Esther : ]

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