Tuesday, May 25, 2010

Big Bear Comments

Rating: 5.0

We went up to Big Bear,
Up the ice covered roads.
We went up in the sky, up in the air,
climbing high like mountain goats.
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Juan Olivarez
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Sylvia Lukeman 03 January 2012

What fine descriptions and what a beautiful picture you conjur up. Wishing you a happy healthy new year, Sylvia Thank you for your comments about my poem A living thing.

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Smoky Hoss 20 August 2011

Juan, this wonderful poem makes me wish to be there right now! Thanks for sharing your experience with us. Peace.

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Lynn Glover 09 June 2010

Hi Juan: Thanks for the comments on 'Up in the Big Bear Mountains'. I wrote this poem when I was 21 years old and stationed at Coronado, Calif. near San Diego. Our minds do seem to think in the same manner, as this poem you wrote is so similar to mine. I really think that rhyming makes the poem and you do it well. I must give you a 10 for a great write. Your Friend, Lynn

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Adeline Foster 26 May 2010

This took me back to my life in the far north of Ontario. Those frost- bitten toes and fingers seem like a badge of fond memories now. I wouldn't give up one especially when I realize how it served to give me my resilience for later life. Adeline

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