Big Bang Theory Comments

Absolutely agree with Janice. It's almost of parody of performance poetry, but when it actually does end with a bang it actually left it on a serious note for me. The jaunty rhyme scheme helped add the chaos element. It's a home run in my book! Delilah

This had me laughing out loud on the word 'Sunny'! Then I fried reading it aloud. It's a fantastic poem to chant. I love this. I shall come back to it and chant it again - it's given me an appetite for chanting it!

Interesting poem that gives the reader a smile...and it is just a good piece of poetry. Great imagery......Keep sharing. Shelley

A naturalized naturalist, Pessimistic Pacifist It’s safe to say That I’m not very Sunny. ............ Hello David, I like these last lines very much... Thank you for your fine the comment. Tsira

Your poems are sort of a challenge for the imagination - the images and views are changing so fast i need a rest :) . Let me see what is the next.

Hello poet David. Great read man. LC

A great run of images that flow seamlessly into one another - the sponteneity of thought echoes loud and clear - a revealing and emotionally charged write. j.

Oh my God! ! ! I love this poem! It is shockingly pungent and bitter sweet. At a moment I felt a George Carlin tone, but you 'wacked' your own unique verbato in the last few lines. Wonderous, truly!

Loved this David, a wonderful play on words, I am interested in the Big Bang theory myself lol,10 for this, Lynda xx

an engaging write about being disengaged.Imagintive use or words a touch satyrical tinged with underlying sadness

Very good word play - hints of satire? it flows and flows... good one! remember to keep it coming - I'm going to run out soon. Yuri*

Fine poetic snapshots of a very interesting writer with a flare for language and a tendency to the melancholic. Clever poem. Not a word wasted. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

another great poem by the poet desantis. don't forget about the b-12 shots and ginseng supplements those help pass the day.

Wow! That is sooo good! I love the flow of words, the poem reads really well. Good one David. HG: -) xx