Sunday, April 5, 2009

Big Bang Comments

Rating: 3.6

Thrashes and bash
Your thoughts rash
Creep into heart
Bang with crash
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akram saqib
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Sad _eyes 13 April 2009

A healthy choice in words and i really admire that.. We are going to get along just fine i rate this at 25

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Identification Accepted 12 April 2009

loved reading this 10

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Shams Tahir 08 April 2009

without the knowlege of the poet there exploded something and he started revolving around his love.good idea and good comparison.

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Elaine Oxamendi Vicet 06 April 2009

Caught unawares as always is the way these things work. Ëxplode in feelings', the things is to make the fireworks keep exploding.

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ata khan 05 April 2009

Bravo! Akram Thanks for Sharing 10+

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