Friday, December 3, 2004

Big Apple Comments

Rating: 4.6

I grew up
in the ''Big Apple''
'almost traded
my soul for gold-
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Adryan Barnathan
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Max Reif 23 August 2005

Oy Vay! You say things perfectly sometimes, Adrienne. The progression of 'noticing', ending with 'Jeffrey, who is a doctor', is matchlessly put.

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Raynette Eitel 13 July 2005

Oh dear, this confirms what people out west have thought about the Big Apple mentality. And yet there are poets and song writers with great heart and soul (you, for instance) who come from that Big Apple and manage to rise above it. This is well done. Raynette

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