Bidding Farewell Comments

It seems rhyme comes easy to you but I know how difficult it is. Your mastery of teh English language is commendable.

A fitting epitaph. Full of feeling. Must have been a wonderful person.

A fitting epitaph. Full of feeling. Must have been a wonderful person.

A fitting epitaph. Full of feeling. Must have been a wonderful person.

dear hasmukh I don't think there's any think I could say that as not already been said. a beautiful poem. terry

dear this is such a lovely poem...whole theme almost made me cried.......10/10

I am so sorry for your loss. Your grief is palpable. May your whole family find a way to heal.

A heart felt poem lamenting and praising the loss of the narrator's love one.A good write one...I like this 10 poem.

This is a touching poem about the narrator's deceased wife. She was highly devoted and diligent. She handled tough situations with poise and decorum. He laments her passing, but at last surrenders to the Almighty. Thank you, sir. Again, some grammatical errors and awkward rhythms occasionally, but nice on the whole.

When someone always stood for the right, you always admire them. and when they die you ask why. Good poem.

I totally agree with all of the previous comments. Beautiful and emotional poem written about the sudden passing of a loved one. May god bless your heart for being strong and understanding, and not questioning gods wisdom..........

An amazing poem, full of wisdom and deep insight....death is inescapable and because of it things take much more value; when we know that they are gone forever...the irony of life and death...voted!

I couldn’t stop my tears, Cheeks swollen and wet wears, Stared at the laid face, Dumb founded as if lost race? ....10

We had good week end, Happy time pass and signals send, Nothing went wrong previous night, ....10

It is very painful andtear giving to get away from your love.... well penned

OH! YOU MADE ME CRY...........touching composition! ! ! A+++ 10+++

Poignant, stimulating and touching.you have written it really well.

it is tearful event....10

tears may role from ur eyes...10

Teary are the eyes of a moaner but happiness are the hearts of he/she who understands the final reating place of a surjouner. Well versed and splendid indeed. It is a 10.