Tuesday, April 18, 2017

Bidding Adieu Comments

Rating: 4.6

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No song I have my blessed child
No thoughts which could bid adieu,
As you travel to yonder world
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Amar Agarwala
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Very sad but poignant poem..congratulations on being selected poet of the day..I think of those young ones lost to this world..we are all children of someone..

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Amar Agarwala 27 April 2017

Thanks Lorraine... its only due to the good wishes of my fellow poets and this wonderful site - PoemHunter, that my verses see the light of the day and reach the enlightened minds of poets. So glad you liked the verses.

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Norah Tunney 27 April 2017

I can feel the poignancy behind the lines the poet looking for comfort through the belief in a world beyond. We all ache to see again those beloved ones we have lost. Sometimes just a glimmer of hope will carry us through the most extreme sorrow. Thank you Amar for this.

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Amar Agarwala 27 April 2017

Thank you so much Norah... for reading and liking my verses.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 27 April 2017

Amar, it is great to see you as the poet of the day! Congratulations! You truly deserve this honour. Know the Almighty will bequeath Upon you his blessings due, Fair angels will be by your side And cupids will play with you. Farewell is a touching poem that tugs at your heart strings. Only three verses, but you have expressed it through deep and surging emotion. A full vote for you Amar.

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Amar Agarwala 27 April 2017

Thank you Geeta... which reminds me that I am yet to send you a copy of - Elegies. I shall within the next coupe of days. Regards!

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Savita Tyagi 27 April 2017

Full of tenderness and grief that touches the heart. Passing of a child....a very difficult scenario that has been expressed so well. Thanks for sharing. You certainly have done justice with your inspiration.

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Amar Agarwala 27 April 2017

Thank you Savita... so inspiring to hear such encouraging from you.

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Rahman Henry 27 April 2017

Penned with colorful pain; Thanks a lot to share with.

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Amar Agarwala 27 April 2017

Thanks Rahaman.... glad you liked the poem.

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Edward Kofi Louis 27 April 2017

Adieu! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Amar Agarwala 27 April 2017

Thank you Edward. Best regards.

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Tom Allport 27 April 2017

a lovely thoughtful poem giving a sense of love and peace? .............well written.

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Amar Agarwala 27 April 2017

Thanks a lot... Tom for liking my verses.

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Bharati Nayak 27 April 2017

Very touching lines from a grief stricken heart at the passing away of a young child- - the words fail to express sorrow except praying before Lord to bequeath His blessings on the soul.

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Amar Agarwala 27 April 2017

Thank you Bharati... for reading my verses.

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Siddartha Montik 27 April 2017

Congrats for being Chosen as Poem of the day.. Well written message.. Liked the lines You will bask in glory and joy Of the past you will not rue, Live in gardens of paradise Immersed in a blissful hue. Thank you for sharing! ! 10++!

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Amar Agarwala 27 April 2017

Many thanks... Siddartha. Best wishes always.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 27 April 2017

Start your life anew.... congrats on being chosen....

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Amar Agarwala 27 April 2017

Thanks Bernard... will always endeavor my utmost with my verses.

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Rajnish Manga 19 April 2017

Feather light sentiments expressed on the passing away of a very young child. Thanks a lot. ....the Almighty will bequeath Upon you his blessings You will bask in glory and joy

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Amar Agarwala 19 April 2017

Dear Rajnish, Thank you so much for your kind words. Feel rejuvenated with your good wishes.

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Jazib Kamalvi 18 April 2017

An impressive farewell poem. Thanks

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Amar Agarwala 19 April 2017

Thank you... Jazib, for reading and liking my verses.

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