Friday, March 18, 2011

Bicycles Around The Moon Comments

Rating: 5.0

Lonely couples through the night as they travel along
Stepping pedals that go round and around for a while
With two innocent hearts maybe not knowing what’s wrong
Though they already knew they may be lovers with guile.
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Obed dela Cruz
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Jacqui Broad 10 October 2011

You are wise for your age. Beautiful piece of work. Original comparison. Ingat ka, palagi. :)

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Joseph Poewhit 04 August 2011

Long bike ride, hope the tires don't wear out.

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 18 March 2011

Very fascinating poem. The poem is extremely rich in imagery and emotions. Loved the way you described the whole scene. Great write indeed. Thanks for sharing..... Please read my poem 'I am not stubborn.'.

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Obed dela Cruz

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